Post by tonylover89 on Mar 11, 2009 23:43:03 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300] 5 Months After Moving In With Gibbs[/glow]
Jasmine walked into the store and looked for the coffee her dad seemed to like. She found the coffee and went to the counter and paid for it. As she was walking out a guy smiled and pressed a button on a remote device. The building blew up and sent Jasmine flying across the street and threw a window in another store. Jasmine layed there unconciess. She barely had a pulse. Blood was everywhereand she was losing blood fast.
Okay guys what do you think about this plot.
Jasmine walked into the store and looked for the coffee her dad seemed to like. She found the coffee and went to the counter and paid for it. As she was walking out a guy smiled and pressed a button on a remote device. The building blew up and sent Jasmine flying across the street and threw a window in another store. Jasmine layed there unconciess. She barely had a pulse. Blood was everywhereand she was losing blood fast.
Okay guys what do you think about this plot.